That's lovely, Laynie. Angsty, and painful, and yet there is such comfort to be had in their whole-heart/body/soul affection for each other. This shines like a tiny little gem lying on a square of black velvet. Sometimes snippets are just gorgeous little snippets that provoke thought and emotion and don't need to do anything more. I would not be opposed to reading more of this, but it is perfect to me just the way it is. Excellent scene that I enjoyed "seeing" very much.
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Date: 2009-07-24 03:02 pm (UTC)