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Title : Wet ( For prompt no.9, Orlijah in the shower, written for [livejournal.com profile] orlijah_month )
Pairing : Orlijah from my Orlijah AU here. This took place during the weekend that Orli and Elijah had to babysit Orli's 4-month-old-niece, here.
Rating : R
Word count : 310
Disclaimer : Fiction.

"Hold her, Orli," Elijah gasped, the shower head falling out of hands slippery with Johnson & Johnson Strawberry Top-To-Toe Wash.

"I am!" Orli gasped back, his back already aching from bending over the bathtub while holding the squirming, wet baby. God, Sam would kill them if they were to bruise little Kaitlin while bathing her. If only the little babe would stop moving for even 5 minutes.

As it was, they already had been at it for what seemed like hours. First the soiled diapers. The extremely soiled diapers. And the smell. Orli had never smelled anything remotely like that, ever. And just when they thought that they had it done, Kaitlin had peed all over their nice, clean bed. Elijah had just been changing the sheets, their extremely stained and sticky sheets from their activities late last night. Orli's cock twitched a little as he remembered the way Elijah was spread out in front of him, his entrance opened and glistening with lube, and that was so not the right thing to think of while holding a baby.

"You have to hold her tighter, Orli," Elijah said, exasperated. "Here, let me," he hooked the shower head to its holder on the wall and took Kaitlin from Orli. The baby squealed with laughter, probably thinking that it was some kind of game. Well, at least one of us is having a good time , Orli thought sourly.

"And you might as well take off your clothes, too. You're soaking wet," Elijah grinned.

"I'm not getting naked with you in the shower with Kaitlin here!" Orli squeaked.

"Oh you silly man," Elijah huffed. He climbed into the bathtub, his towel snug around his middle, the baby secure in his arms and hauled Orli in with him, clothes and all.

And that was how little Kaitlin took her shower with her two doting uncles. Well, one doting uncle anyway.

~Fin

Date: 2008-01-10 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theartoffic.livejournal.com
awwwwwwww! This is so sweet and funny!

Orli had never smelled anything remotely like that, ever. This made me laugh out loud :D

Loved it! *squishes you*

Date: 2008-01-10 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Orli must have been horrified and vowed never, ever to adopt a baby of his own.

Thankie Steph! *kisskiss*

Date: 2008-01-10 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
Aww, Kaitlin, cover your eyes!

:D

So cute!!

Date: 2008-01-10 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Orli and Elijah didn't have a clue on what they were getting into when they agreed to look after the baby heheh.

Thanks Shinta!!

Date: 2008-01-10 05:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
So funny and cute. Kaitlin's just having fun. Orli needs to relax and have fun too. It's the only way to cope with a giggly, wriggly wet baby.

Date: 2008-01-10 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I think that would be the first and last time Orli would agree to do his sister that kind of favour!

Thank you, Julia :D

Date: 2008-01-10 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
OMG! That was so funny and cute!

Thanks so much.:D

Date: 2008-01-10 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3<3<3 :D

Date: 2008-01-10 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] not-a-lamb.livejournal.com
See, that's a great take on a fairly straight-forward prompt! I was looking for something like that, but I just couldn't pull it off.

Great job!!!

Date: 2008-01-10 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you! I haven't read the other shower fics yet because I can't read and write at the same time and I was just hoping that the rest won't be of the same type.

Thank you! :))

Date: 2008-01-10 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/tweedle_/
"Oh you silly man," Elijah huffed. Hahahaha. Love it. :D

Date: 2008-01-10 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you! I had fun writing it! :D

Date: 2008-01-10 11:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] violettefemme.livejournal.com
This is really sweet! I like this better than most of the whoa baby shower ones because its fresh and unexpected for this prompt!

Thanks!

Also also... how are you feeling?

Date: 2008-01-11 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you! I read the prompt repeatedly in case it's Orlijah's sex in the shower heheh.

I'm okay Cass, my mum has been discharged and she's recovering well :)
Edited Date: 2008-01-11 12:06 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-01-11 02:24 am (UTC)
bandwench: (Orlijah Month)
From: [personal profile] bandwench
Orlijah + Baby Kaitlin = Grinning Wenchie

What a fun take on this prompt. I love fics when a baby gets tossed into the mix. Something about these two with a little one that makes my ovaries want to happily implode. Thank you for THAT!

Lovely, sweet fic!

Date: 2008-01-11 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you thank you thank you!

You know, I've seen quite a number of pics of Elijah holiding a baby/kid but never Orli. A manip of Orlijah with a baby would be beyond awesome! ;D

*hopes*

Date: 2008-01-11 03:11 am (UTC)
bandwench: (Orlando-Island Boy)
From: [personal profile] bandwench
Orli with baby manip *squirms* now I think I might HAFTA make one! It's crazy--I've done a couple of Daddy Elijah manips, but never once thought of pasting a baby in Orli's arms. Hee!

I do happen to have a couple Daddy Orlando manips in my collection that another manipper made. Would you like me to e-mail them for your perusal? (I wouldn't feel right posting them without the artist's permission, but I think sharing by e-mail would be okay if you are interested. LMK. Ü )

Date: 2008-01-11 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Ooooooooh, I am very interested!! my email is linwoh99 at yahoo dot com.

THANK YOU!!

Date: 2008-01-11 03:27 am (UTC)
bandwench: (Wenchie Yorkie)
From: [personal profile] bandwench
On their way! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Date: 2008-01-11 01:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
OMG have you seen these (http://www.elflady.com/orlandolove/showpost.php?p=564295&postcount=29)?



Date: 2008-01-11 07:25 pm (UTC)
bandwench: (Orlando-I am the ride!)
From: [personal profile] bandwench
*tries to gather exploded ovary bits and put them back where they belong* OMG! I had NOT seen those, and thankyousoveryveryverymuch for sharing that link. He is so pretty and so sweet with kids! *barely holds ovaries together again*

Date: 2008-01-11 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aprilkat.livejournal.com
Oh, this made me giggle - especially Orli's somewhat fastidious reaction to the baby's natural state!

Date: 2008-01-11 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Hee hee, obviously Elijah is the fun uncle here :DD

Date: 2008-01-11 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suzy-74.livejournal.com
Awww! How cute!

Date: 2008-01-11 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you, dearest. I do hope it cheered you up a bit

Date: 2008-01-11 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
awwwwwwww! so cute and adorable omg! I love them with the baby, especially with Orli so clueless and flustered, hehe.

I really love your take on the prompt, luv. ;D *hearts*

Date: 2008-01-11 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Well, I tried to come up with something sexy and erotic and hot but this came out instead. Glad you like it, baby!!!

And omg I've got a WIP buried somewhere in one of my folders. Must watch 'Prison Break' one of these days. For inspirations ;)

Date: 2008-01-11 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
hehehehhee!! I watched season 1 from Prison Break, I quite liked it, it has its flaws but its full of slashy goodness. ;D

Date: 2008-01-11 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
It's a prison, girl :D

Btw, have you seen those pics of Orli in Nepal? Sooo much potential for manips of ElijahandOrliwithababy *winksnudgespokes*

Date: 2008-01-11 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
He was in Nepal? when? *lives under a rock*

GIMME!!! :D

Date: 2008-01-11 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Enjoy! (http://www.elflady.com/orlandolove/showpost.php?p=564295&postcount=29)

Date: 2008-01-11 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
And Orli in LA (http://stephanie-gb.livejournal.com/66889.html), in case you haven't seen.

Date: 2008-01-11 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
awwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute in Nepal omg!! I've never seen those before! thanks luv! *snogs*

ooohhhh and i've seen those LA ones, with him -his pretty curls omg- and the pretty blondie wot looks like Charlie fjslk;fjl ahem. yeah. :D

*loffs*

Date: 2008-01-11 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Exactly my thoughts!!

Which bring to mind of an Orlando and a Charlie of a Victorian era ;)
Edited Date: 2008-01-11 04:33 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-01-11 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
Victorian boys? ahem, I dunno wot boys you talking about. >.> :P

Date: 2008-01-11 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yukisherry.livejournal.com
ahahahahaha! orli, the silly man...

<3

Date: 2008-01-11 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
The babe's not helping much with Elijah's secret dream of a future adoption :DD

Date: 2008-01-12 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wynterhawk.livejournal.com
*Giggles* That was so cute, sweetie!

Date: 2008-01-12 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Hee, it did cross my mind to dedicate this fic to you on your birthday then I remember that baby!fic is not really your cup-of-tea. Heheh. Thank you for reading, darling *mwaaaah*

Date: 2008-01-12 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wynterhawk.livejournal.com
Oh please! If it's from *you* then it's my cup of tea :) *huggles*

Date: 2008-01-12 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Btw, I love your shiny new icon :)

Date: 2008-01-12 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wynterhawk.livejournal.com
Thank you! Custom made by [livejournal.com profile] annwyn55 :)

Date: 2008-01-12 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I know! And I saw the manip as well *flaails*

Date: 2008-01-12 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wynterhawk.livejournal.com
Wasn't it awesome! I thought I would die!

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