short orlijah porn
Apr. 30th, 2005 12:31 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
layne67Gosh, I just wrote my first porn! No plot whatsoever, It's porn pure and simple, written because ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
faeriebambi sort of urged me to it. Warning: unbeta'd and cliches abundant!
Orli’s already weeping shaft met Lij’s hard, hot length. They both groaned in unison at the contact. Lij scrambled up the bed, hands tightly gripping the already rumpled bedsheets, opening himself wider at the same time. “Turn around” Orli whispered .Lij complied immediately, lying on his stomach, his buttocks slightly raised. Orli carefully placed his cock on Lij’s tight opening, no extra lube needed, his persistently leaking slit providing all that they needed.With one hard thrust, Orli was all the way in, hitting Lij’s sweet spot, making him gasped with the exquisiteness of the pain-pleasure that was Orli inside of him. Orli began to move, slowly and gently at first, gradually going faster and harder, his hips snapping back and forth Just the way Lij liked it. Just the way he liked it. Lij moving up to meet him, their sacks slapping obscenely against each other.
Giving.
Taking.
Possessing.
They came at the same time, as they always did, Orli’s hot fluid pulsing inside Lij, and Lij’s come spattering between his stomach and the bedsheets. They collapsed into each other’s arms, laughing, kissing. And in love.
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faeriebambi sort of urged me to it. Warning: unbeta'd and cliches abundant!Orli’s already weeping shaft met Lij’s hard, hot length. They both groaned in unison at the contact. Lij scrambled up the bed, hands tightly gripping the already rumpled bedsheets, opening himself wider at the same time. “Turn around” Orli whispered .Lij complied immediately, lying on his stomach, his buttocks slightly raised. Orli carefully placed his cock on Lij’s tight opening, no extra lube needed, his persistently leaking slit providing all that they needed.With one hard thrust, Orli was all the way in, hitting Lij’s sweet spot, making him gasped with the exquisiteness of the pain-pleasure that was Orli inside of him. Orli began to move, slowly and gently at first, gradually going faster and harder, his hips snapping back and forth Just the way Lij liked it. Just the way he liked it. Lij moving up to meet him, their sacks slapping obscenely against each other.
Giving.
Taking.
Possessing.
They came at the same time, as they always did, Orli’s hot fluid pulsing inside Lij, and Lij’s come spattering between his stomach and the bedsheets. They collapsed into each other’s arms, laughing, kissing. And in love.
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Date: 2005-04-30 09:36 am (UTC)That was very brave of you. Wow, I´m so impressed. And it was so HOT!
Short yes, but now you have something to build on, should you want to continue. This was really good. Me likes it. ;)
*cross fingers and hope you will continue*
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Date: 2005-05-01 02:15 am (UTC)The backstory would be the boys undressing each other, the sequel would be them cleaning up hee hee.
Thanks for reading. Your turn now ( to write )
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