short orlijah porn
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layne67Gosh, I just wrote my first porn! No plot whatsoever, It's porn pure and simple, written because ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
faeriebambi sort of urged me to it. Warning: unbeta'd and cliches abundant!
Orli’s already weeping shaft met Lij’s hard, hot length. They both groaned in unison at the contact. Lij scrambled up the bed, hands tightly gripping the already rumpled bedsheets, opening himself wider at the same time. “Turn around” Orli whispered .Lij complied immediately, lying on his stomach, his buttocks slightly raised. Orli carefully placed his cock on Lij’s tight opening, no extra lube needed, his persistently leaking slit providing all that they needed.With one hard thrust, Orli was all the way in, hitting Lij’s sweet spot, making him gasped with the exquisiteness of the pain-pleasure that was Orli inside of him. Orli began to move, slowly and gently at first, gradually going faster and harder, his hips snapping back and forth Just the way Lij liked it. Just the way he liked it. Lij moving up to meet him, their sacks slapping obscenely against each other.
Giving.
Taking.
Possessing.
They came at the same time, as they always did, Orli’s hot fluid pulsing inside Lij, and Lij’s come spattering between his stomach and the bedsheets. They collapsed into each other’s arms, laughing, kissing. And in love.
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faeriebambi sort of urged me to it. Warning: unbeta'd and cliches abundant!Orli’s already weeping shaft met Lij’s hard, hot length. They both groaned in unison at the contact. Lij scrambled up the bed, hands tightly gripping the already rumpled bedsheets, opening himself wider at the same time. “Turn around” Orli whispered .Lij complied immediately, lying on his stomach, his buttocks slightly raised. Orli carefully placed his cock on Lij’s tight opening, no extra lube needed, his persistently leaking slit providing all that they needed.With one hard thrust, Orli was all the way in, hitting Lij’s sweet spot, making him gasped with the exquisiteness of the pain-pleasure that was Orli inside of him. Orli began to move, slowly and gently at first, gradually going faster and harder, his hips snapping back and forth Just the way Lij liked it. Just the way he liked it. Lij moving up to meet him, their sacks slapping obscenely against each other.
Giving.
Taking.
Possessing.
They came at the same time, as they always did, Orli’s hot fluid pulsing inside Lij, and Lij’s come spattering between his stomach and the bedsheets. They collapsed into each other’s arms, laughing, kissing. And in love.
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Date: 2005-04-30 05:02 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-04-30 05:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-01 02:11 am (UTC)Thanks for reading!
xxx
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Date: 2005-05-01 03:12 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-04-30 09:36 am (UTC)That was very brave of you. Wow, I´m so impressed. And it was so HOT!
Short yes, but now you have something to build on, should you want to continue. This was really good. Me likes it. ;)
*cross fingers and hope you will continue*
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Date: 2005-05-01 02:15 am (UTC)The backstory would be the boys undressing each other, the sequel would be them cleaning up hee hee.
Thanks for reading. Your turn now ( to write )
Hugs
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Date: 2005-04-30 01:22 pm (UTC)And thank you for posting. You're braver than I am, my first fic attempts still haven't seen the light of day.
Oh, and, more? Please?
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Date: 2005-05-01 02:21 am (UTC)The whole story would be posted, oh some time in the next century lol.
Thanks for the feedback. That's me killing time until the next installment of your own story. I'm dying here to find out what happened after the ride in the car!
xxx
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Date: 2005-04-30 01:26 pm (UTC)you should really write more of this, maybe you can think of a plot for them, or if you don't feel like it, don't! just write more porn, its yummy..*uses orlijah icon to inspire u* ♥
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Date: 2005-05-01 02:28 am (UTC)and yes,in my head, Elijah is always in our favourite position, bottoms up *g*
i love your icon.if ever the story got written can i call it that - "My Beautiful"?
loves
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Date: 2005-05-01 01:19 pm (UTC)and ofcourse u can call it My Beautiful, I don't mind at all.. it just fits them doesnt it? and I'm sure Muse don't mind that we're using their song's lyrics either :P
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Date: 2005-05-05 10:51 am (UTC)I'm not familiar with Muse. I tried googling for it but couldn't find the lyrics. Do you have them? And what sort of a song is it?
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Date: 2005-05-05 10:13 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2005-04-30 07:10 pm (UTC)Sweetie, that was brave, and wonderful - and gorgeous!! You captured Teh Sweet Sex - and tossed in some schmoop at the end (like frosting on a cake)!! BRAVO!!
I love what you did with this, and I have just friended you so I'm looking forward to (hopefully?!) having you share even more delicious writing with us!!!
*huge hug*
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Date: 2005-05-01 02:32 am (UTC):)
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Date: 2005-04-30 09:27 pm (UTC)Go you!!
:-)
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Date: 2005-05-01 02:35 am (UTC)hugs
*peers over Arabia's shoulder to see what her boys are up to*
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Date: 2005-05-01 08:42 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2005-05-02 12:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-01 02:39 pm (UTC)oooh, that is indeed a very pretty picture....
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Date: 2005-05-01 07:21 pm (UTC):-)
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Date: 2005-05-11 11:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-12 07:16 am (UTC)Help me out here girl, I know I'm completely useless, but what does this mean?? You want me to do the test thingy?? Other people have asked me to do it?? If so, who???
I'm up to my eyeballs writing Damaged 3 and I haven't read any of these. Should I do something? Have I offended anyone? Do I need to leave town fast?
I am deeply honoured to be your first ls friend. It kinda means a lot to me.
:-)
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Date: 2005-05-12 08:08 am (UTC)Yippee!! In that case please DO NOT do the test. Or anything else that might take you away from Damaged 3!
Other people have asked me to do it?? At least 2 other persons that I noticed. One is violettefemme. I cant remember who the other one is. And again you dont have to do it and you certainly do not need to leave town fast *giggles*
Now you go back to your Elijah and Orli.
Hugs
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Date: 2005-05-12 10:58 am (UTC)Do I get the impression you are rather keen for me to keep writing?
:-)
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Date: 2005-05-12 02:31 pm (UTC);)
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Date: 2005-05-13 10:39 am (UTC):-))))
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Date: 2005-05-09 03:39 am (UTC)Rummaging around in your Orlijah-ness =)
Date: 2009-11-19 05:14 pm (UTC)Gah. This.Was.Hot.
"..the pain-pleasure that was Orli inside of him"
Giving.
Taking.
Possessing.
*nods*
(I might have to stalk you forever now)
Re: Rummaging around in your Orlijah-ness =)
Date: 2009-11-19 11:44 pm (UTC)I have some real Orlijah gems written by other authors if you want :)
Re: Rummaging around in your Orlijah-ness =)
Date: 2009-11-20 12:38 am (UTC)I´m on a feedback-mission after my dark Lurker-Years and try desperately to catch up on all precious Lotrips! *twirls*
YESSSSS I want ORLIJAH-GEMS!!! GAAAAAHHH I wantssss them ALL!!!! *kisses your feet*
(well whatever good Lotrips, but otp is Orlijah)
*hearts*
Re: Rummaging around in your Orlijah-ness =)
Date: 2009-11-20 12:41 am (UTC)Oh but you must! *sqirms*
Orlijah!muses are just behind the corner waiting to throw throw naughty!plotbunnies at your feet...
You can´t ignore them =P
*pleading eyes*
Re: Rummaging around in your Orlijah-ness =)
Date: 2009-11-20 01:23 am (UTC)Re: Rummaging around in your Orlijah-ness =)
Date: 2009-11-20 02:55 am (UTC)I´ve read A_LOT through the years but Orlijah´s are always a bit tricky to find since Orlijah-writers have decreased or disappeared.. *sniffle*
Again, thanks alot! *hugglesnuggles*