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I'm in the mood for a good cry. Over death!fics, that is. In which one of the main character dies. I'm not saying that I enjoy reading them per se but once in a while I came across truly wonderful fics in which there are character deaths that really moved me to tears. They have to be stand-alone fics though. I won't be able to bear it if, say, [livejournal.com profile] mews1945 decides to kill off her Family!Zeke ( No no no Julia. No ).

They have to be extremely well-written too, otherwise the grief won't come across and make you cry. I've always thought that making people cry, really, really cry, is one of the hardest thing to achieve in writing a story.

The End of the Story written by [livejournal.com profile] grievous_angel is one such example. It's an alternate ending to her epic Houseparty, a Viggo/Elijah love story set in the 1930s. Do go read it if you haven't already. You'll still get the story even if you haven't read Houseparty but for maximum "cryage" you need to read it from the very beginning. Lots of tissues will be needed here.

Then there is this fic written by [livejournal.com profile] cloudlessclimes - Deeper Than All Roses, an Orlijah pairing that I read a long time ago way when I was an anon lurker here in LJ. Now that story has always remained in my mind even though I first read it ages ago. Very beautifully written, the death in the story still haunts me till now.

For What Binds Us is another Orlijah, written by [livejournal.com profile] often_adamanta. She writes angst really well and this fic is an alternate ending in which one of the boys is suffering from leukemia, and dies.

So, can anyone rec me a good fic with character death in it? As I've said, I'm in the mood for a good cry.

Date: 2006-08-01 05:00 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
As a rule I don't generally read or write death fics, so I can't help you here as far as knowing of any that I've read!

The closest I came to writing it (and the death actually does occur...but there's something weird about it that I can't explain because that gives it away) is in Citadel, but I'm not pimping it since I wrote it and am not a good judge of my own stuff...just letting you know that it exists. :-)

Date: 2006-08-02 08:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I have read Citadel and I lovelovelove it. It's even better the second time around now that you've combined the two parts. But there's still this one thing that I cant quite decide - did Frodo dream the whole thing up when he was sick or did it really happen but in another dimension perhaps?

Date: 2006-08-02 11:38 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Yes....:-)

Date: 2006-08-02 11:41 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
yikes, now I'm a little embarrassed -- I see you were really looking for RPS fics based on your above list (I wasn't paying much attention to the list since I don't read RPS mostly, lol). But to answer your question, yes...:-)

Date: 2006-08-02 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I was looking for all kind of fics, not RPS only :-)

Date: 2006-08-02 11:42 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
ooops that first yes...was mine but I somehow was anonymous and didn't finish my thought before hitting post, lol! Okay, obviously I'm not awake yet today...:D *signs off and goes on to work* :D

Date: 2006-08-01 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geniusartist.livejournal.com
Hi -- I'm self-pimping. LOL.

Two Noble Worlds (http://geniusartist.livejournal.com/29919.html) -- features Domlijah and character death. Link is to the first part. :D

Date: 2006-08-01 05:49 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lbilover.livejournal.com
Well, I wrote a Merry/Pippin death fic that you can find here (http://lbilover.livejournal.com/27169.html) if you want to give it a whirl (I don't know if you read that pairing or not).

Date: 2006-08-01 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
My friend [livejournal.com profile] naemi wrote a lovely Josh/Lij death!fic; not explicit and sooo sad... found here at her site, you-dare-not.com. She's got a LOT of stuff there and archived my stuff too. :) Total sweetheart.
If this isn't the DIRECT link the story is titled "Ashes".

And yes, Julia. You kill Zeke, I hunt you down and make you watch North over and over again backwards. Yea, he was cute. But that won't matter.

PS...

Date: 2006-08-01 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Just checked the link; it goes to her index. At the box on top, hit 'story archive' (small lettering, the girl doesn't consider blind folk, lol!) and read Ashes. :)

PPPPPPS...

Date: 2006-08-01 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Wait, it IS sorta explicit, lol... sorry, hadn't read it in awhile... lol...

Date: 2006-08-02 08:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
You kill Zeke, I hunt you down and make you watch North over and over again backwards.

Is it very bad? I havent seen it yet but I'm thinking of doing so.

I've just finished reading 'Ashes'. Oh that is so sad! This is my favourite part :

The next morning, I was not strong enough to tell him.
The next week, I was not brave enough to tell him.
The next month I was not wise enough to tell him.
Half a year after it had happened, he found out.


That terrible, terrible tragedy - all from a moment of weakness. And both of them saying and realizing things that matter, only it was too late.

Thanks honey, for the rec *sniffles*


Date: 2006-08-02 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Haha no problem, m'sweet. Glad to help with the cause. ;)
And yea, those ARE some powerful lines. *sniffs with you*

Date: 2006-08-01 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grievous-angel.livejournal.com
Thank you for that! I made myself cry with that one...

Date: 2006-08-02 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
And I cant wait for the next installment of 'A Desert Tale'. Am I going to cry just as much? If so then I think I'd better read it at home. That time when I read 'The End of the Story' I got some funny looks from people at work - red eyes, red nose :-)

Date: 2006-08-03 05:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grievous-angel.livejournal.com
I hope I'm going to make you cry, yes! If I get it right then it will..

Date: 2006-08-01 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Guh... oh frickin'... *weeps piteously*

Date: 2006-08-01 07:01 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
I know! I can't read deathfics, they just destroy me.

Date: 2006-08-01 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
I don't mind 'em meself, but... I do, lol. Oh geez.

Date: 2006-08-02 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Then he gathered the tiny form closer to his chest and began to walk. . .across the terrace. . .into the rose garden and out. . .across the lawn to the bare umbrella of the willow tree. There he sat in the snow, Frodo cradled in his lap. . .watching as the snow flakes fell, unmelting, upon the peaceful upturned face.

And he didn't get to see Sam for the last time ...

*cries*

What a lovely, poignant tale. I love the way the elves ( the twins!!! ) took care of the Ringbearer, old Bilbo being there for him. And the way they tried to tempt his appetite with all sorts of delicacies which, btw, made me feel hungry if not Frodo *g*

Thank you Janet, for the rec. I enjoyed reading that story very much.



Date: 2006-08-01 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
No, honey, never.
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Date: 2006-08-02 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Never in one of my stories.

Date: 2006-08-02 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
Ah, that's nice to know.

So long as Casey doesn't get killed either. :)

Date: 2006-08-02 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you.

*heaves a sigh of relief*

See the roundabout way of me trying to find out what'll happen to Zeke in the next chapter - you did left him in a very perilous situation, you know

:-)

Date: 2006-08-02 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
THANK GOD. *falls over in relief*

Date: 2006-08-02 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
I don't know if you've read Falling Up by [livejournal.com profile] almostnever. It's Dom/Elijah, Dom/Evie, Dom/others, NC-17, which, aside from being a stunning way to look at death, gives an intriguing view of life. Very brilliant.

Europanya wrote the trilogy What Sam Knew, What Frodo Saw, and the last part What Gandalf Heard, Frodo/Sam, post Grey Haven, PG-13 to R. In the last part there is a very heartwrenching death scene.

And...self-pimping. :D A Passage To The West.

Date: 2006-08-02 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I've read that trilogy but it was so long ago, I'll have to read them again. But I do remember Europanya's 'An Ordinary Evening' which is one of my favourite fic ever.

I'm looking forward to reading Falling Up, and your very own death-fic of course!

Thanks for the rec :-)

Date: 2006-08-02 07:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
I could've sworn I've read more deathfics, but only those two stay in my mind. Have you read Lobelia Sackville Baggins' Swansong? It's also a deathfic, but not very heartwringing.

I should do more deathfic. Yes.

Anyway, as an aside, when I was still working in the magazine we held annual shortstory writing contests for teens. Death is such an oft-used plot point it gets NUMBING. Once out of nearly 200 submissions, I found four fatal car accidents, two or three brain cancer (in one of them the lover donates his brain to his dying girlfriend, he dies (d'oh!) and she lives miserably for the rest of her life...ouch!), a couple of leukemias, and in none of these stories the patients are depicted as languishing, suffering, losing hair, etc.--all the things that cancer patients will inevitably do. It's always a surprise cancer. One day the girl is pretty, healthy, jilted. The next day she died, and her callous boyfriend mourned for her all his life. Argh.

Date: 2006-08-03 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
No I havent read Swansong but I really enjoyed one of her fics, I think it was called 'Rain', and her many other fics too. I think it was her who wrote that fic in which Lobelia was trapped inside the closet when Sam and Frodo err, did things to each other :D

Heh, how about death in movies? The characters always seem to be suffering from something 'clean' if you know what I mean, and never, say, cancer of the colon ^-^

Date: 2006-08-03 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
Yes, she did. The wardrobe!Lobelia, I mean. :) Lucky Lobelia...hmpf!

Urk. Yeah. Why not colon cancer, prostate malignancy, gross skin cancer... You're right. We've never seen any of those around. :)

Date: 2006-08-03 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Just finished readind your fic.

I'm glad that Galadriel was there with Frodo just before he gave himself up to the sea. But oh Sam, why oh why must you leave your Frodo? Did you feel alienated at Tol Eressea?

*feels sad at their parting*

*wants them to be together forever*

Date: 2006-08-03 04:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
If they're together forever, it's not a deathfic, is it? :)

Anyway, I read that fic you recced, Deeper than All The Roses? Boohooooo.... That's sooo tragic! It hurts uss, burns uss...and we loves it. *sobs* I think, Lin, if that really happened, God forbid, I'd be making that kind of pilgrimage too, with roses and teddy bears and displaced grief, to that place where he got shot. *wanders away to bawl some more*

Date: 2006-08-02 09:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
Thank you for the fics, Layne. But alas. I don't have rps to rec. I'm not too strong to read that kind of things. Give me torture or violence. I can live with that. (I mean read or write. LOL.) But not death.

But perhaps you can try the newest fic by [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com]? I know it's Frodo, but you can really cry reading that.

Date: 2006-08-03 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I've seen that fic posted. So it's a sad one? I've bookmarked it and will be reading it soon.

Aah, but you have written one death-story, Shinta. Remember that one? The one that I told you made me cry and I almost couldn't continue reading?

Date: 2006-08-03 06:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
*frown*

Goodness. I'm so sorry but I don't have any idea which one. Guh. And I forget also about your lovely feedback. *smacks self*

*washes my brain so it can remember more*

Date: 2006-08-03 08:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
It's one of your original fics, sweetheart. In Bahasa. And quite a personal one too.

Date: 2006-08-03 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-o-r-h-a-e-l.livejournal.com
Aaaaa... *smacks head again*

Hm. Think I'd share with you a little about it. :D

It was written in an afternoon, around 5, and I completely forgot that it was my boss's birthday in two days. We are quite close and I've been giving her stories for gifts. I had no idea what to write at first but then my mind went to her age at that time.

And I began to think what I could do with that number. I sat and began to type, and I couldn't stop. Well, I don't want to praise myself in this case, but... aduh. I was so sad myself and I wetted my keyboard with my tears. Memalukan ya? LOL.

Yah, begitulah cerita untuk hari ini. Heheh.

Date: 2006-08-02 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elanorgardner.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] conniemarie wrote a gorgeous deathfic that is here -- http://www.guestroom.the-green-door.net/Connie/Mercy.htm . LotR FP, AU.

Really got to me, but she wrote it BECAUSE there was not closure in canon and she wanted closure, for everyone and for herself.

Date: 2006-08-02 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
I knew I was forgetting something! Yes, 'Mercy' killed me the first time I read it, the second time, the third... Well, you get the picture.

*has the image of that tent with a flap that allows the sun to shine on Frodo's face*

*and little Frodo throwing wreaths into the Brandywine*

*reaches for tissue box*

Date: 2006-08-02 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elanorgardner.livejournal.com
And, silly me, I forgot we did a "deathfic" challenge at [livejournal.com profile] lotr_fic_recs too.

Here you go -- http://community.livejournal.com/lotr_fic_recs/45993.html.

Date: 2006-08-03 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
And thanks for the link. I've no idea there are so many awesome deathfics around!

Date: 2006-08-03 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
And Happy Birthday Elanor!

Date: 2006-08-03 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Yes I've read that one. [livejournal.com profile] sophinisba rec'ed it to me.

That one just about killed me. Almost every sentence was painful and it wrenched my heart every which way. And it could easily have happened the way she wrote it if Frodo sailing to the West had not been an option.

Date: 2006-08-02 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilybaggins.livejournal.com
One of the most beautifully written Frodo death fics ever---it will make you sob your eyes out if you've not read it already:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1299248/1/

I am not squicked, generally, by anything BUT deathfics. I cannot read them and don't read them, and if I'm not warned and I find a major character dies who does not in canon (i.e., Boromir or Theoden deathfics don't bother me) I get very upset. Frodo or Aragorn, and I go into a deep depression that's hard to come out of.

I read the fic above before I realized I had no tolerance for deathfic---after reading it, I'll never knowingly read another.

Date: 2006-08-03 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you for the link, Lily! I can read deathfics if I know beforehand that there will be a death in the story, or if it's a standalone fic ( usually for rps ) or for alternate endings. I'd be upset if it's a major character death in an ongoing story with no warning at the beginning.

Do you read Harry Potter? There's a rumour that JKR might just kill off Harry and that's an example of a big no-no with me.

:-)

Date: 2006-08-06 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilybaggins.livejournal.com
I haven't read the HP books, but I've enjoyed the movies, and I heard that rumor! I really, really hope that Rowling doesn't feel she must kill Harry off simply to make a dramatic statement, in the hopes that that will launch the books into a classic literary genre or something. I mean, Tolkien *could* have easily killed Frodo off, but he chose a much more perfect ending.

I heard that she's had the ending planned for years... even has the last chapter written. And that she recently said she'd changed her mind about what characters died and who didn't. Scary thought. Knowing these are primarily young adult/pre-teen/kid's books, I can't believe she'd just kill him off.

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