Casey/Zeke dialogue ficlet

[layne67]

Dialogue ficlet, done for the workshoppers's first challenge exercise :

Write a story using only dialogue. But the catch is that you have to change settings at least once in the story without confusing your audience. And this is a dialogue, not a monologue: There must be dialogue between at least two characters…although I suppose they do not have to hear each other, but they do have to be talking to one another, somehow.

This is the revised version.

Fandom: The Faculty
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Zeke/Casey
Disclaimer: Not for profit, no character rights


"Ouch! Stop that!"

"Gosh Casey, would you be quiet just for one second."

"Fucking enjoying yourself, aren’t you, you sadistic bastard."

"U-huh. Now, hold still."

"What do you think I’m doing? Dancing the cha-cha? And stop laughing!"

"Hey, it’s not my fault that you got yourself a hook right here."

"Whatever. Just get that damned thing off my butt. Like yesterday."

"I just hope this thing isn't barbed. Now, on three …"

"OWWW OWWW OWWW! You said on three, you fuck!"

"Whoa, got it! Almost an inch. Who needs a doctor when the Zekester is in the house, huh?"

"Shut up. I’m bleeding. DO something, will ya?. "

"I am! Now, where’s that goddamn gauze. Ah, here it is. I’m gonna spray this antiseptic on it. Take a deep breath. This is going to sting a little bit."


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"How do you feel, Case?"

"M’alright. Sleepy."

"That’s because of the painkillers. You okay down there?"

"Yeah. It’s throbbing a little. Nonono. NO. You are not going anywhere near my ass tonight. Oh!"

"Not even for this, huh?"

"Hmmmm… Mmmmmmm … go on."

"Nah, I’m not supposed to be down there, remember? And I guess that means my tongue, too. Go to sleep, Case."

"ZEKE!!!!"

Comments

[lbilover.livejournal.com]

I loved this, Layne. It made me giggle and then gasp (ooh, Zeke's tongue... guh). Poor Case :)

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dear. Hmmm, giggle then gasp. Not the other way around, eh?

:DD

[illyria-novia.livejournal.com]

A hook? What sort of hook? How did it come to be there?

And if you fret and say that your English is less than fabulous, I'll go and marry Zeke. Honestly, this just...flows. :)

[layne67.livejournal.com]

It's a fishing hook and Casey had accidentally sat on it :/ ( btw, it's not inside the anus itself )

I think I must had had Steve Irwin on my mind when I wrote this

Thank you, Novia. You made my day!

[honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com]

Heehee, just as good as when you first tossed it up. *kissles*!

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Thank you hunny bunny!

*loves*

[ex-absolutef238.livejournal.com]

i've read this so many times. i enjoyed that much. just like your other casey/zeke. *adores*

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Thank you darling girl :D

*adores you right back*

[montmorency.livejournal.com]

OMG I love!!! Snarkysexysweetyummy!

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Heh heh, thank you!!!!!

*mwaaaaa*

ps I'm still hoping that one of these days you're going to write us a Zekasey :D

[montmorency.livejournal.com]

Don't tempt me on the Zekasey front. I might just do it, and then I'd have another WIP on my hands. <3

[alchemie.livejournal.com]

Yum! Thank you!

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Thank you sweetie :D

[aranel80.livejournal.com]

what monty said omg! I loved this so much, your boys are snarky and caring and sexeh as hell all at the same time. You should write them more often. *nudges* ;D

♥

[layne67.livejournal.com]

For some reasons, I can't write Zekasey unless prompted :DD

♥

[montmorency.livejournal.com]

I can't write Zekasey unless prompted

AHA! Gotcha! Here's your prompt, missy: Write a scene in high school, post-invasion and destruction of aliens, using all of these words at least once... honey, vinegar, lane, mountain, north, alchemy, absolute, lover and Illyria.

:D

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Very interesting *g*

And I'll get my picnic if I do this, right?

;D

[layne67.livejournal.com]

Ahem.

It's up. (http://layne67.livejournal.com/81793.html) :DD

[wynterhawk.livejournal.com]

"Whoa, got it! Almost an inch. Who needs a doctor when the Zekester is in the house, huh?"

niccce. I bet he sayd that to all the wounded boys :P

[layne67.livejournal.com]

That's Zeke for you :DD

Thanks for reading, wyn. And thanks for participating in the polls. You really should try Borderlines, at least the first chapter, it really rocks!