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Tagged from [livejournal.com profile] lisabellex. Casey was playing football and Zeke had accidentally knocked him down. The other tags are here.

[livejournal.com profile] lisabellex wrote :

Zeke slams into Casey on the football field and takes possession. The impact knocks the smaller boy flying and he hits the ground with an awkward thud. Zeke passes the ball to Stan, who, in spite of formidable opposition, catches it and runs. Zeke watches satisfied as his team-mate takes the ball across the line just as the ref blows the final whistle. That's the point at which he, Zeke, turns to face and squat down beside Casey, who appears to have gone into fully-fledged hibernation mode.

Zeke sighs and rolls his eyes. "Hey." It comes out a little more brusquely than he intended, but what the fuck. When there's no response, he shakes Casey by the shoulder. "Game's over. Time to stop acting so fucking dramatic."

Still no response. Annoyed, Zeke shakes Casey again, this time grabbing him by both shoulders and shouting at the same time, “CASEY! GET UP! DON’T FUCK WITH ME!”

Nothing. That’s when Zeke starts to panic. He hardly notices the small crowd that has begun to gather around Casey and him.

Zeke bends down and puts his left cheek near Casey’s nose and mouth. He can feel Casey’s warm breath on his face and he can see Casey’s chest moves up and down in synchrony with his breathing. Zeke puts his hand on one side of Casey’s neck, feeling for the pulse. It is there, strong and regular under Zeke’s probing fingers. Zeke is relieved, just a little though because Casey is still completely out. But at least Zeke does not have to do a CPR. Zeke has never done a CPR before and he has only the vaguest idea on how to do one. Guh, he will probably break Casey’s ribs if he starts thumping on Casey’s thin chest. But he does know that you do not do a CPR on someone who is breathing regularly and whose pulse is good. Zeke quickly checks Casey for any sign of external injuries. There is none that he can see. Does not mean that Casey is not bleeding internally though.

“Do we need to call the medics?” Stan sounds anxious. Zeke can hear Coach Willis in the background, asking the crowd to move off.

“Maybe,” Zeke answers distractedly. He thinks he sees Casey’s face twitches slightly or is it just his imagination? No, there it is again and this time Casey’s eyes flutter open and Zeke can faintly hear Casey saying his name, “Zeke?”

“Casey.” Zeke nearly cries with relief. He quickly gathers Casey in his arms and carries him towards the school, Stan and Coach Willis following close behind.

“Zeke put me down right now. I’m alright. I can walk.” Casey is struggling weakly to get down.

Zeke puts Casey down reluctantly. He still keeps his arms around Casey though, quite oblivious to the coach and Stan standing nearby.

“You were out Casey. I’ve never been so scared in my whole life. What happened?”

“Hypoglycaemia I guess. I skipped breakfast this morning and then you knocked me down.”

Zeke closes his eyes and hugs Casey close to him.

“Zeke,” Casey whispers urgently. “There are people here.”

Zeke grins. To hell with Coach Willis, Stan or whoever else that might be watching. He looks down, tips Casey’s face upward and kisses him.

Hard.

With tongue.

And Casey kisses him back.

Equally hard.

Right there.

In front of everybody.

If they want to be out, they might as well do it in style.

Date: 2005-08-09 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] makealimb.livejournal.com
heh, that made me smile. very cute. yayyy for casey/zeke love. you should write more. :D

Date: 2005-08-10 04:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thanks! I have written a couple of Orlijahs. They're in my memories on my lj if you're interested :DD

Date: 2005-08-10 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] makealimb.livejournal.com
hey cool, i'll check them out when i get a minute. thanks. :)

Date: 2005-08-09 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suzy-74.livejournal.com
Out in style. :D

Love the angst with a happy ending. Wonderful!

Date: 2005-08-10 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thanks Suzy. I didn't mean to post it initially because I thought that it's a bit bland :( but Liz said I should, bless her.

Date: 2005-08-10 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suzy-74.livejournal.com
Bless her! So glad you posted it. You write really good.

Date: 2005-08-09 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com


If they want to be out, they might as well do it in style.If they want to be out, they might as well do it in style.

Oh, yes. This is lovely. I'm a Casey/Zeke fan from way back, and I love what you did with them.

Date: 2005-08-09 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Don't know why the darn quote thing quoted it twice. Anyway, I loved that line.

Date: 2005-08-10 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thanks for saying it twice anyway ;DDDD

Date: 2005-08-10 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
You havent written a Casey/Zeke, have you? Do do write one pretty pretty please.

And thanks for reading! *mwah*

Date: 2005-08-09 04:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-absolutef238.livejournal.com
n'aww. *loves* so romantic. love how casey wanted to walk himself.

Date: 2005-08-10 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I cant seem to get away from 'romantic' grrr

I wish wish wish I could write funny or angst or horror even.

Thanks for reading love!

Date: 2005-08-10 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-absolutef238.livejournal.com
but romantic is good! horror? really wow, layne, you do have a dark side!

Date: 2005-08-10 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
*grins*

Sweetheart I'm into slash so I think I'm already onto the Dark Side. You havent written any dark fics have you? I'd love to read one of yours. You can even turn Cake into a dark fic. The chains are already there....

Date: 2005-08-10 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-absolutef238.livejournal.com
heehee. i think you might be darker than me. i thought my little casey ficlet today was soos sosossoooo dark. but you didn't even flinch.

i can't wait to see what you've got up your naughty little sleeve.

Date: 2005-08-10 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Oh but that was angst! Veerrrry good one too.

Date: 2005-08-10 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Ooops I forgot. You have written one - 'Voodoo'.Now that one is crying for a sequel. And post it publicly, it's good!

Date: 2005-08-09 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com
Gorgeous, honey pie! Well done!

Love this happy ending!

:D

Date: 2005-08-10 04:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
And thank you for letting me play tag. First time too. I dont quite know though. Am I supposed not to have an ending so the 'tag' can be continued or something?

*wonders*

Date: 2005-08-10 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com
It really doesn't matter. Tags don't always have a defined ending. They quite often just peter out, particularly if people have to go sleep or something. They wake up, having moved on, muse is elsewhere, y'know.

That shouldn't stop you from developing your tag, though. You could even expand it into a fic, if you feel so inclined!

:D

Date: 2005-08-10 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I see. It's like a write and reply stat isn't it. Like what you and elfie and pinkegogirl were doing. Gosh then I wasn't exactly playing tag was I?

Date: 2005-08-10 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com
There are no hard and fast rules; you just play it anyway you want to!

Whatever turns you on, hon.

The other thing with tags is that they don't have to be long chunks each time. They can be one-liners. A lot have each participant taking on a particular role. For example, I play in an rpg where I write Dom. So far I'm only writing with one other, who writes both Elijah and Billy. We back and forth working through a particular scene using dialogue and narrative. We don't write down what the other person's characters are thinking or feeling.

Here's a for instance: (not one we've used)

(I'll start with my opening) Dom stirs, stretches and relaxes. He's warm. He's snug. He's in a sleeping bag in... He cracks open one eye. Yes. He's in a tent in Elijah's back yard. And there beside him, in his own sleeping bag, staring at him with those big blue eyes is... Elijah.

"Morning. Where's my cuppa, then?" Dom grumbles as he scratches his crotch.

(she might then respond with)Elijah regards him thoughtfully for a moment before propping himself up on his elbow and replying, "I'll get you a cuppa, but on one condition..."

etc. etc.

:D

Date: 2005-08-10 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com
In fact, I might open a tag in my journal using the first part of this example! Feel free to play. I take my time with tags. Sometimes we only submit one response a day if we're busy. But it's best if there is a lot of back and forth. I'll have to get ready for the day in a mo' - lots to do!

:D

Date: 2005-08-10 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
This sounds very very promising!

Have a good and productive day - be good.

xxx

Date: 2005-08-10 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lisabellex.livejournal.com
Hehe!

Enjoy yours too!

:D

Date: 2005-09-05 12:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Wonderful! It takes a near-tragedy to remind us of what we have, and come so close to losing.

:D

Date: 2005-09-05 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Oh honey that is so aptly put. And your lovely icon says it all!

Thanks for reading *hearts*

Date: 2005-09-16 03:49 am (UTC)
sophinisba: Gwen looking sexy from Merlin season 2 promo pics (solevar)
From: [personal profile] sophinisba
Hi, I've just been enjoying reading a lot of things on your journal (after noticing that you leave a lot of lovely comments with other friends of mine). I hope you don't mind my friending and poking in.

I liked this ficlet a lot, wasn't expecting it to go in that direction at all.

Date: 2005-09-16 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
No of course I dont mind. I'm friending you back!

My RPS OTPs are Orlijah and Viggo/Elijah. As for my FPS OTPs, they're Frodo/Sam, Frodo/Merry, Frodo/Big Men and of course Casey/Zeke. But I'm quite unable to write Frodo as much as I would like too because the style of writing for Tolkien's rich characters are quite different. More, hmmm, what word should I use, baroque?

Thank you for reading this. I adore casey/zeke. My favourite fics in that fandom are Borderlines and Birthright. Have you read them?

Date: 2005-09-16 05:45 am (UTC)
sophinisba: Gwen looking sexy from Merlin season 2 promo pics (Default)
From: [personal profile] sophinisba
Domlijah is pretty much the only RPS I read (sorry), but for FPS I'm more flexible as long as some version or other of Elijah is involved. I still think of Frodo/Sam as my OTP but lately don't actually read that much of it, spend more time with the interspecies crowd on LJ and enjoy Frodo/Merry fics very much (I think it's transfer from liking Domlijah fic). The only writing I've done so far is about Frodo and more gen than slash. I find RPS and explicit sex a lot more intimidating to try to write than hobbit fic. But I do intend to try a zekasey someday. And yes, Borderlines and Birthright are my favorite Faculty fics as well.

Meeting new people is fun.

Date: 2005-09-17 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I read Domlijah too. There're some really good fics of that pairing.

enjoy Frodo/Merry fics very much (I think it's transfer from liking Domlijah fic).

As much as I love Orlijah, Legolas/Frodo didn't do anything to me. Nope, not even a twitch.*grins*

I've just found your Frodo In Jail series. *happy* I have lots and lots of fics to look forward too, thank you!

Date: 2005-09-17 02:36 pm (UTC)
sophinisba: Gwen looking sexy from Merlin season 2 promo pics (Default)
From: [personal profile] sophinisba
The Frodo-in-jail series is pretty silly, as Frodo-in-jail stories tend to be, but I've been having a good time with it.

And no, I can see the appeal of Orlijah, but Legolas/Frodo... no, really don't think it would work. (Somebody somewhere has probably done an amazing job wiht it though.)

Date: 2005-11-25 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mirith.livejournal.com
Sweet! I enjoyed it, especially the ending. Thanks for posting.

Date: 2005-12-08 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading Miri *hugses*

Date: 2007-07-27 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
I'D NEVER READ THIS! Stumbled on it just now!
I LOVE it!! Gee, I wonder if I'm gonna retaliate by demanding for MORE, expand it, more C/Z, whatever.
YES! I AM!
*demand demand demand demand*!!

Date: 2007-07-27 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
Talk about blast from the past.

*BEAMS*

Heheh, you found this! And you made my day with your comments *hugshugshugs*

And hey, why don't you surprise Liz by tagging this. Please, please, I'd LOVE to read your take on this. The link to her original post is up there.

Date: 2007-07-27 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honeyandvinegar.livejournal.com
Ooh... maybe I could... but after I get my Joshes done!! :D! It's awesome to find old fic like that. I love it!

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