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Gosh, I just wrote my first porn! No plot whatsoever, It's porn pure and simple, written because [livejournal.com profile] faeriebambi sort of urged me to it. Warning: unbeta'd and cliches abundant!

Orli’s already weeping shaft met Lij’s hard, hot length. They both groaned in unison at the contact. Lij scrambled up the bed, hands tightly gripping the already rumpled bedsheets, opening himself wider at the same time. “Turn around” Orli whispered .Lij complied immediately, lying on his stomach, his buttocks slightly raised. Orli carefully placed his cock on Lij’s tight opening, no extra lube needed, his persistently leaking slit providing all that they needed.With one hard thrust, Orli was all the way in, hitting Lij’s sweet spot, making him gasped with the exquisiteness of the pain-pleasure that was Orli inside of him. Orli began to move, slowly and gently at first, gradually going faster and harder, his hips snapping back and forth Just the way Lij liked it. Just the way he liked it. Lij moving up to meet him, their sacks slapping obscenely against each other.

Giving.

Taking.

Possessing.

They came at the same time, as they always did, Orli’s hot fluid pulsing inside Lij, and Lij’s come spattering between his stomach and the bedsheets. They collapsed into each other’s arms, laughing, kissing. And in love.




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Date: 2005-04-30 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
mmmmmmmmm....HOT!! thats really good for your first time fic! I didn't know u have the talent for writing girl!

you should really write more of this, maybe you can think of a plot for them, or if you don't feel like it, don't! just write more porn, its yummy..*uses orlijah icon to inspire u* ♥

Date: 2005-05-01 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
oh i have plots. plenty of them. but they're vague and sort of just running around in my head without going anywhere.

and yes,in my head, Elijah is always in our favourite position, bottoms up *g*

i love your icon.if ever the story got written can i call it that - "My Beautiful"?

loves

Date: 2005-05-01 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
in my head, Elijah is always in our favourite position, bottoms up mmmmmmmmm...yeah, more of that please!! *bats eyelashes at you*

and ofcourse u can call it My Beautiful, I don't mind at all.. it just fits them doesnt it? and I'm sure Muse don't mind that we're using their song's lyrics either :P

Date: 2005-05-05 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
I'm sure Muse don't mind that we're using their song's lyrics either

I'm not familiar with Muse. I tried googling for it but couldn't find the lyrics. Do you have them? And what sort of a song is it?

Date: 2005-05-05 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aranel80.livejournal.com
oh Muse are my favourite band! they're an english rock band, the song is called "sing for absolution" and the lyrics are here (http://www.microcuts.net/uk/lyrics/song/sing_for_absolution.php) its kind of a sad song, but I love it. If you'd like to listen to it too I'd upload it for you just lemme know ;)

Date: 2005-05-06 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
oh thanks! i was looking for the song titled "my beautiful" lol. i'm assuming it's a slow song? the lyrics are beautiful btw. and i'd love to listen to it

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